Feedback

This has progressed a bit but is still quite weak in terms of its content - you need more research and analysis and where is your storyboard? It should be scanned in and added here? You need to go back over my feedback and develop some of your posts more.

• the analysis of the Lock Stock sequence - add comment on what you would like to use from this clip in yours?
• box office statistics - link to your project - why is this good news for your idea? what does it suggest about making this type of film?
• do you still need some examples of real institutions (production and distribution companies) who could make your project???

Planning is very thin, too - locations list - we need photos, as we do for your cast - both need comments on why they are suitable? You need risk assessments and evidence of your music choices and possibilities with reasons why...

This is still worrying me, as is your lack of footage. This is worth 50% of your final mark this year and the effort must reflect this. Look at my entry on my blog to see where you should be up to.

Mrs Doggart