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There is some evidence of research but it still is a little skimpy.... look over what is required for the perfect blog and see what else you can add. Iknow it requires effort outside of lessons but it is worth marks... You still need to take note of some of the things I mentioned in my last feedback.

New comments:

• box office section - why is it vital to make a film in a genre that is popular? add brief comment.
• Guy Ritchie section - add some still images or video clips to illustrate?
• have you done an audience survey? have you defined your audience using GRASS and thought about what you can do to ensure your opening appeals to this group?

You need to get your planning on here as well and crack on with the filming. This is still not really what it should be and I don't want to see you lose marks but nor do I want to see you not getting on with the filming...

Mrs Doggart