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There is still nowhere near enough work on your blog.

For starters:

• you need to add a reflection on your prelim
• Lock Stock post - you need to add a comment on what you could learn or use from this clip

You also need some more opening sequences (aim for four in total) and analysis and reflection on them. You need some genre research and some research into your audience and institution. What you have done so far will not gain many marks, so please do something about this.

Mrs Doggart